[projectaon] Re: Editor's Companion Submission

  • From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Tue, 01 Dec 2009 23:07:23 +0000

On 01/12/2009 20:20, Thomas Wolmer wrote:
If no one has any complaints about the wording, I'll get these into the test
area tonight or tomorrow morning. Phew!

If we footnoted them as "Only turn to this section if you personally
commanded a company of men who defended the bridge at the Battle of
Cetza", would that work? I'm working from vague memory here.

Well, more like attacked the bridge (or came to the support of those
who were attacking the bridge, to be specific). But this is
unnecessarily detailed as you either (sooner or later) follow Prince
Graygor fighting at the hill, or you fight at the bridge.

But do we really need a footnote, can't we just extend the text here
with this extra qualifier? "If you took part in the Battle of Cetza
and fought with the Lencian knights at the bridge", or somesuch?

But would a normal person remember such a vague detail from five (or even 
seven) books previous? ;-)

--
Simon Osborne
Project Aon

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