On 01/12/2009 20:20, Thomas Wolmer wrote:
If no one has any complaints about the wording, I'll get these into the test area tonight or tomorrow morning. Phew!If we footnoted them as "Only turn to this section if you personally commanded a company of men who defended the bridge at the Battle of Cetza", would that work? I'm working from vague memory here.Well, more like attacked the bridge (or came to the support of those who were attacking the bridge, to be specific). But this is unnecessarily detailed as you either (sooner or later) follow Prince Graygor fighting at the hill, or you fight at the bridge. But do we really need a footnote, can't we just extend the text here with this extra qualifier? "If you took part in the Battle of Cetza and fought with the Lencian knights at the bridge", or somesuch?
But would a normal person remember such a vague detail from five (or even seven) books previous? ;-) -- Simon Osborne Project Aon ~~~~~~ Manage your subscription at //www.freelists.org/list/projectaon