[projectaon] Re: Comment period for Magnakai series
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Wed, 4 Apr 2012 16:49:18 -0700
On Sat, Mar 24, 2012 at 6:25 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> On 23/03/2012 23:34, Jonathan Blake wrote:
>>
>> On Thu, Mar 15, 2012 at 8:32 AM, Simon Osborne<outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> BOOK 8
>>>
>>> (er) 157: [so: Capitalise 'hide', 'hide' and 'or' at the start of the
>>> three
>>> options.]
>>
>>
>> What do you think about putting dashes in front instead since this is
>> constructed as a single sentence?
>
>
> Or an ellipsis, I guess?
>
> ...hide in the pulpit--turn to 96;
>
> I just think a dash at the start and in the middle of each option looks
> rather strange:
>
> --hide in the pulpit--turn to 96;
>
> It looks as though the text is being parenthetically offset by a pair of
> dashes.
I hadn't noticed the other dashes on the same line. Maybe also switch
those to commas?
-- hide in the pulpit, turn to 96;
--
Jon
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