atw: Re: Should we always give users what they ask for?

  • From: "John Catania" <jcatania@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: <austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Tue, 10 Mar 2009 18:13:42 +1000

Hi Geoff,

Thanks for providing me with some context regarding the traditional scientific 
method of measuring comprehension; that helps to inform my understanding.  I 
still think that the age issue (which seemingly has not had adequate scientific 
study) is very relevant.  There may still be a generational disjunction in the 
workforce; an increasing number of younger workers, raised in the so-called 
'digital age', comprehend things differently to their older counterparts.  I'm 
not intending to sound ageist, but we live in an ageing population; this 
current 'digital age' generation of workers will determine how information 
needs to be delivered. It may be inevitable: yes, we should consider the 
desires of the 'digital age' workers; they will soon be the majority.    
  ----- Original Message ----- 
  From: Geoffrey Marnell 
  To: austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx 
  Sent: Monday, March 09, 2009 1:07 PM
  Subject: atw: Re: Should we always give users what they ask for?


  Hi John,

   

  No, it's not "that users might make the wrong choice regarding what media 
they use". The issue is that they may believe they understand something without 
actually understanding it. The way comprehension levels are usually measured is 
you get the readers to answer questions about what they have just read. The 
results I mentioned in my first posting result from giving two groups of people 
the same text to read (one delivered online and the other delivered on paper) 
and then asking them questions about the text to see how well they understood 
it. Almost every result I have seen shows that those who get the text online 
can answer fewer questions correctly than those who read the same text on 
paper. So a power-plant operator, relying on online instructions, may 
misunderstand the instructions (or be more likely to misunderstand the 
instructions) if they were only available online (or even if they were allowed 
to read them in preference to identical paper instructions).

   

  And hence the concern I raised, which I shall repeat (if only to keep the 
debate on track):

   

    1.. Some want us to pay special attention to the media preferences of our 
readers. Give them what they want, in other words. 
    2.. Many of the same folk suggest that younger readers prefer digital 
media, and that soon the younger reader will become all readers. 
    3.. Can we reconcile these two claims: if we give readers want they want 
and they all want online, will there be problems. 
    4.. In the injury-and-death situations I mentioned, there may well be 
problems. 
    5.. In the call-centre example I gave, there may be business reasons to 
prefer one medium over another (and not necessarily the one that readers 
prefer). 
    6.. Thus we should not, perhaps, accept that reader preferences carry the 
day: yes or no? That was the question I asked, and not too many correspondents 
have actually answered it directly. 
   

  Cheers

   

  Geoffrey Marnell

  Principal Consultant

  Abelard Consulting Pty Ltd

  T: +61 3 9596 3456

  F: +61 3 9596 3625

  W: www.abelard.com.au


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  From: austechwriter-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx 
[mailto:austechwriter-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of John Catania
  Sent: Monday, March 09, 2009 1:00 PM
  To: austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  Subject: atw: Re: Should we always give users what they ask for?

   

  Hi Geoffrey, 

   

  Are you suggesting that users might make the wrong choice regarding what 
media they use to read the information?  Perhaps in some cases, such as a 
nuclear power plant crisis, online delivery of information may not be 
appropriate; in a crisis, access to power would clearly be a problem. However, 
in times when the plant is running smoothly, it may be more efficient to 
provide online documents, given that most users prefer online.  I think the 
question is: why do they prefer online?  Perhaps they believe that they 
comprehend materials better in that format? 

   

  Providing a range of formats (online, print, video etc), where appropriate 
(i.e. not when life may be endangered by using a computer, such as in a nuclear 
crisis), seems reasonable to ensure users access information in the most 
meaningful way. One caveat, though: it may not be cost-effective to provide a 
range of formats for documentation; that would be at the company's discretion.  

    ----- Original Message ----- 

    From: Geoffrey Marnell 

    To: austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx 

    Sent: Monday, March 09, 2009 10:52 AM

    Subject: atw: Re: Should we always give users what they ask for?

     

    Hi John,

     

    Some good points, but .

     

    Imagine you are the manager of a nuclear-power plant. You have provided all 
the control room workers with a wide variety of instructional documents in many 
formats: some printed, some online. You know that they all prefer online. So, 
in a crisis requiring the workers to quickly ascertain what to do, you suspect 
that they will opt for the online materials. But you also know that 
comprehension of online materials is poorer than printed materials. You know, 
too, that if a crisis is not immediately countered, the plant may blow up and 
hundreds may die. Would you still be happy for the workers to discover what to 
do in a crisis from online sources? And if not, doesn't this mean tat you might 
want to ensure that critical procedures are only made available in the control 
room in printed form (or in whatever form provides maximum comprehension)?

     

    BTW, this doesn't mean that I am not a fan of online delivery. Online help, 
video, wikis and all the rest are great for learning and for training. All I'm 
saying is that in some situations, you might not want to offer a particular 
medium, regardless of users' preferences.

     

    Cheers

     

    Geoffrey Marnell

    Principal Consultant

    Abelard Consulting Pty Ltd

    T: +61 3 9596 3456

    F: +61 3 9596 3625

    W: www.abelard.com.au


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    From: austechwriter-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx 
[mailto:austechwriter-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of John Catania
    Sent: Monday, March 09, 2009 11:39 AM
    To: austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
    Subject: atw: Re: Should we always give users what they ask for?

     

    Hi everyone,

     

    I think it's appropriate to provide required materials in a variety of 
media: available in print and online; or online as a video link, where 
appropriate.  I think the key here is choice, to maximize the meaning of 
information for consumers.  

     

    I understand that many organisations also have an imperative to comply with 
disability communication standards; providing a variety of formats takes this 
into account.  

     

    It seems reasonable, then, to provide as many feasible options to 
consumers, to maximize their understanding of the information.

     

    John   

      ----- Original Message ----- 

      From: Michelle Hallett 

      To: austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx 

      Sent: Monday, March 09, 2009 8:59 AM

      Subject: atw: Re: Should we always give users what they ask for?

       

      Interesting question, my thought:

       

      Do we provide information in the most comprehensible format or the format 
which will actually be consulted and read? Which is more likely to prevent 
death or injury, comprehensive instruction materials no one reads, or less 
easily comprehended materials that people are reading?

       

      Best regards

      Michelle

       

       


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      From: austechwriter-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx 
[mailto:austechwriter-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Geoffrey Marnell
      Sent: Monday, 9 March 2009 9:51 AM
      To: austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
      Subject: atw: Should we always give users what they ask for?

       

      Hello austechies,

       

      The digital age has changed the way we gather information. Where once we 
had only printed texts, we now have printed texts and a vast range of digital 
media. There is some evidence to suggest that some readers (especially younger 
readers) now prefer to source information from digital media and that some are 
shunning printed texts altogether. Some commentators suggest that this requires 
a radical rethink about how technical writers deliver information. There is 
good reason to think that the younger generation will carry their preferences 
with them as they become the middle generation and then the old generation; 
thus all readers will eventually prefer digital media. Best to get ready, then, 
and start leaving behind old technologies, such as printed texts.

       

      But hang on a minute. Should user preferences be the sole determiner of 
the media we choose for delivering technical documentation?

       

      Consider this case:

       

        a.. We are writing instructional materials to accompany a product whose 
misuse might lead to death or injury (say, a lathe, the control system of a 
nuclear-power plant, a dialysis machine, or the like). 
        b.. We have an option to deliver the material in printed form or in 
digital form (via a visual display unit attached to, or near, the product). 
        c.. We discover that the majority (even all) our intended audience 
prefers to gather information online rather than from printed texts. 
        d.. We know from research that the comprehension of online material is 
poorer than that of printed material. That is, our understanding of material 
read online is poorer than of the same material read offline, as judged by our 
ability to correctly answer questions about it. (Cognitive psychologist and web 
usability expert Jakob Neilsen reports that comprehension can be up to 25% 
lower; other studies suggest as much as 60% lower: see "Effects of online 
reading" by M. Macedo-Rouet et al., Science Communication, vol. 25. no. 2, Dec. 
2003, pp. 99-128. Also see "Online v. print reading: which one makes us 
smarter?", Scientific American, December 2008). 
       

      In these circumstances, would we accept our audience's preference for 
online delivery knowing that comprehension of material read online can be as 
low as 60% of the comprehension of the same material read in printed form? Is 
there not, in such cases, a moral dimension to the choice of delivery media? In 
cases where death or injury might result from misuse, are we not morally 
obliged to produce documentation in whatever medium minimises the risk of 
misunderstanding, regardless of user preferences?

       

      Even in cases where misunderstanding is unlikely to lead to death or 
injury, there may be good reasons to override user preferences. Suppose, for 
example, that you manage a call centre. You have to decide whether the printed 
knowledgebase that your support staff now relies on should be converted to 
online and then decommissioned. You poll the staff and they all say that they 
prefer online reading. But if comprehension of online instructions is markedly 
less than of printed materials, the risk of customers getting poor advice from 
support staff is higher if support staff have only online references to rely 
on. Hence online delivery would potentially lead to greater customer 
dissatisfaction, and possibly even more support calls (as disgruntled callers 
call back for further assistance). Online might be cheaper, easier to maintain 
and preferred by your staff - and yet possibly a poor business decision in the 
long run.

       

      By all means let's explore new ways to deliver instructional material. 
But we need to temper our enthusiasm for new media with the realisation that 
not all media is be equally effective in transmitting understanding. Readers' 
preferences for particular media are important and need to be considered. But 
there are cases where considerations of effectiveness, and perhaps ethics, are 
of equal, if not greater, importance.

       

      Some questions for young readers (and others who prefer to read online)

        1.. Suppose you are studying for an exam. If you are like most 
students, you will want to get as high a mark as possible. Suppose you need to 
master the contents of a particular textbook to do well in the exam, and 
suppose further that the textbook is available for loan from the library and 
available online. Like all young readers, you prefer digital to paper media (or 
so we are told). But you happen to discover that comprehension of online 
material is poorer than that of printed material (up to 60% poorer in fact). 
Will you now study the textbook online or borrow it from the library? 
       

        2.. Suppose, now, that you have got your degree and have started your 
first job. You want to get on quickly in the company, be seen as bright and 
enthusiastic, and not goof up. Your job requires you to consult lots of 
policies, procedures and work instructions. If you misunderstand these 
policies, procedures and work instructions, you may goof up. The policies, 
procedures and work instructions are available online and in print. You know 
that comprehension of online material is poorer than that of printed material. 
Will you opt to read the policies, procedures and work instructions online? 
       

       

      Let the arguments begin.

       

       

      Geoffrey Marnell

      Principal Consultant

      Abelard Consulting Pty Ltd

      T: +61 3 9596 3456

      F: +61 3 9596 3625

      W: www.abelard.com.au

       

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