On Thu, 8 Oct 2015 at 04:41 Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Not Fixed:
(ne) The Story So Far: [SO: Are we happy with the small illustration
placements here?]
(er) The Story So Far: your customized roadster and a gasolene tanker ->
your customized roadster, and a gasolene tanker [so: Serial comma]
(er) The Story So Far: [SO: Inconsistent quote mark usage: the
'Mavericks' vs. the Saints. In the printed book, there are no quote
marks around 'Mavericks', though they are used in Tssf for Books 2 and
3. We should standardise this. Suggest: the Saints -> the 'Saints'
(first use only) for consistency. Else, revise Books 1-3 to remove the
quotation marks around 'Mavericks', 'Lions', etc.]
(er) 51: One Pistol [SO: Is the word "One" necessary? I don't recall
this in the earlier books]
(er) 109: [SO: Start a new paragraph when Cookie speaks after "bridge."]
(er) 131: Quick Cal -> Quick, Cal
(ne) 131: him..., and -> him...and [SO: Unless this comma is desired
here, in which case record its addition on the Errata Page.]
(er) 155: into the truck -> into the trunk
(er) 160: wouldn't you Phoenix -> wouldn't you, Phoenix
(er) 192: C'mon Cal -> C'mon, Cal
(er) 265: C'mon Cal -> C'mon, Cal
(er) 295: Murdered by the looks -> Murdered, by the looks
(er) 305: [SO: Paragraph break after "muses Rickenbacker."]
(er) 342: [SO: Add paragraph break after "cuts you off."]
(er) 350: Your reputation is further glorified [SO: is "glorified"
appropriate? Would "enhanced" be more accurate?]