[HG-PBEM] Re: At the Trash....
- From: "Dennis D. Kirkpatrick" <dkirkpat@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: <apaworks@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Wed, 23 Apr 2003 13:30:52 -0600 (MDT)
[Dennis: You guys are doing well with the scene, but I wanted to point out
that Tina was standing outside the truck, not sitting in it. Aaron and
Robb, don't worry about fixing that; I'll change that when I do the
summary, just continue along.]
Robb Neumann said:
>>> Satisfied, the last guard looked up and spoke, saying, "The trucks'
>>> look clean, sir."
>>>
>>> The lead guard raised his arm and the front gates into the compound
>>> slowly rolled open. "Thanks for your cooperation. You're free to go
>>> in." He gestured throught he open gate. "Follow the road to your third
>>> right and head south till you reach warehouse Alpha-13. You can park
>>> your trucks and start your parts aquisition from there."
>>
>> Rohgen turned to look at Tina, glowing purple with intensity in her
>> seat. "Are you always gonna jump outta the vehicle whenever you see a
>> guard?" Rohgen said dripping with sarcasm. "I guess its true, 'GRELS
>> always deliver'," Rohgen said jokingly, knowing Tina would not
>> appreicate his humour, but still expecting a laugh from the other
>> occupants.
>
> Tina turned and nodded at Rohgen, maybe to signal that she heard him,
> maybe agreeing that yes, as a matter of fact, GRELs *do* always
> deliver. It was hard to tell just what that tiny motion meant.
>
> "Three intersections ahead, we can turn to the right, to find Alpha-13.
> The guard has instructed us to start our search there," she finally
> said.
Carlie leaned forward. "Well, so far so smooth, eh?" She smiled at Tina.
[...]
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