Mike, I think it is extremely inmportant and am glad to see progress on this project. Some points: 1. I hope when finalized we can have printed up a few hundred for distribution at various functions and public events. This has been lacking for a long time time and I'm sure has hurt us. 2. There are two Thunderbird Parks, so it should say Thunderbird Park in Glendale, or Thunderbird Conservation Park. 3. Typo in the membership section, it should say ...aged 65 and... 4. Maybe for contacts, add some of the generic 'officer@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx' email addresses and/or refer to contacts page. Jack Jones