ERIC: > not sure if Mike's poem is news, an old memory, or > pure invention ... unwilling to commit a response > to one possibility. I'm embarrassed to have sent something so personal to the list. I hope I didn't make anyone embarrassed for me. The event did happen, on February 17. Her mental life had long been was in turmoil, her emotional life in complete tatters. The person I had fallen in love with 21 years before had very nearly disappeared, becoming this confused and inept person who seemed to always be struggling to remember where she was and what she was supposed to be doing. I resented that she had designated me "rescuer". It made me angry at her and myself that I could not just say no and walk away. It was not a pretty relationship. So much begrudging and anger on my part. Anger and hurt on hers. I had gone to her house that night because she was not answering her phone and the body shop kept calling me wanting to know what she wanted to have done about her wrecked car. I let myself in with the hidden key. The dog was ecstatic to see someone. I kept calling out her name, went to her bedroom and that's where I found her. My first reaction was anger that she was dead. Another mess to be dealt with, more shit to be straightened out. Christ! I called the police and waited while they did their thing. Later that night, one of my kids asked if I was OK. I started to say yes, that I'd not felt any affection for this woman for many years. But just as I was about to answer my breath was sucked away. I felt like I was falling or that everything was falling away from me. A sudden, terrifying emptiness. A part of me had just died and I hadn't realized it, doing what needed to be done. I was deeply surprised at this sadness. Later I remembered Hopkins' poem: To A Young Child Margaret, are you grieving Over Goldengrove unleaving? Leaves, like the things of man, you With your fresh thoughts care for, can you? Ah! as the heart grows older It will come to such sights colder By & by, nor spare a sigh Though worlds of wanwood leafmeal lie; And yet you will weep & know why. Now no matter, child, the name: Sorrow's springs are the same. Nor mouth had, no nor mind, expressed What heart heard of, ghost guessed: It is the blight man was born for, It is Margaret you mourn for. --Gerard Manley Hopkins So I set out to try and let loose the sorrow that had sprung up in me with such surprise. I wrote a "poem" to the only people I thought might understand and judging from the expressions of sympathy, I think I was right, but perhaps it was a bit too personal for such a public venue. In that case, I beg your indulgence. Mike Gear ------------------------------------------------------------------ To change your Lit-Ideas settings (subscribe/unsub, vacation on/off, digest on/off), visit www.andreas.com/faq-lit-ideas.html