[haiku] Re: New Haiku flier - Draft 1 for review
- From: "Humdinger" <humdingerb@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: haiku@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Fri, 29 Jan 2010 11:06:39 +0100
-- Jorge G. Mare, on Fri, 29 Jan 2010 00:59:21 -0800:
> Here is the first draft for the new Haiku flier for review:
>
> http://haikuzone.net/files/temp/2009-02-29_haiku-flyer_2010_letter_draft-1.png
>
Nice.
I agree, a new screenshot with a bit more action would be nice.
Two suggestions: In the top blurb, "...computing experience that is
elegant and fast, yet very powerful." sounds better to me. The simple<-
>elegant is debatable...
The 3rd bullet fits better to the rest as "Rich OO API for faster
development" IMO.
Regards,
Humdinger
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