I'm with Chris on this one. I don't see a problem with the description, and I think we've worked too hard to get people to actually write a synopsis to start singling out ones we don't like on a public list. I know a lot of people who have been shy about writing descriptions at all since they have to use their own words instead of copying something from Amazon. I don't want to undermine a person's confidence. I really don't want to go back to seeing the word "none" in the synopsis field of books. Monica Willyard -----Original Message----- From: bksvol-discuss-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:bksvol-discuss-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Chris Feist Hmmm. I have no problem with the description personally. It sounds as if she suffered greatly, and yet persevered. Even if I did have a problem with it, I wouldn't want it changed just because it bothered me. Chris Feist - The one and only! To unsubscribe from this list send a blank Email to bksvol-discuss-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx put the word 'unsubscribe' by itself in the subject line. To get a list of available commands, put the word 'help' by itself in the subject line.