[bksvol-discuss] Re: Question About The German Shepherd Dog
- From: "Van Lants" <vanlant2006@xxxxxxx>
- To: <bksvol-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Mon, 20 Sep 2010 22:10:56 -0600
Kathy,
I just checked my other account and it showed me sending you a direct reply on
Saturday morning. The email address looks the same as the one I see on this
message, so I'm not sure why you didn't get it. Anyway, I'm pasting the text
of my original reply below so you have it.
Kathy,
I am sorry I missed that one. Thought I caught everything.
So here's the scoop. That first small paragraph on page 16 about the
insecticides is actually part of a paragraph further down that starts with
the line about the brush and before you get to the bracketed note about a
photo. The full paragraph on page 16 should read as follows:
For your dog's coat you will need a brush with hard bristles but preferably
natural ones. A flea comb is another essential item, and get an insecticide
against fleas as well. Those insecticides that come in spray cans are handy,
as are alcohol-based liquids that can be rubbed on. You will also need
tweezers for removing ticks and other parasites.
(Photo)
Regarding the last line on page 15 about the muzzles, that text is as the
book reads. The first lines on page 16 should read as follows.
"veterinarian, be sure to get one that can be adjusted for size. A muzzle
that will fit a puppy will clearly not fit a grown dog. "
There is a diagram caption right above it that got muddled in with the
first line of text, so please edit the text as written above.
Thanks for checking on it.
Robin
----- Original Message -----
From: Kathy Hester
To: bksvol-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Sent: Monday, September 20, 2010 6:08 PM
Subject: [bksvol-discuss] Question About The German Shepherd Dog
I am almost finished proofing The German Shepherd Dog
Everything About Purchase, Care, Nutrition, Diseases, and Training
by Helmut Antesberger (translated from the German by Rita and Robert Kimber).
All I lack in order to recommend approval are a few words that are missing
either from the bottom of page 15 or the top of page 16.I wrote to the email
address given in the contact information for the submitter Thursday or Friday,
but haven't heard anything. I wonder if someone would look it up for me, if
it's available on the Amazon site. I tried to look it up on Google books, and
didn't get any results. Here is what it looks like:
If you decide to buy a muzzle for use on trips or possibly on visits to the
16
essential item, and get an insecticide against fleas as well. Those
insecticides that come in spray cans are handy,
Thank you.
Kathy
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