[projectaon] Re: Tabletop Heroes
- From: McSwain LeRoy <simonaamanarfan@xxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Mon, 28 Jan 2008 00:27:19 -0500
fellow kai lords,
i enjoyed looking over tabletop heroes (for the first time). please find list
of issues to follow. throughout the columns, mr. dever used company names as
plural nouns. i marked all the ones i saw although this usage may be
stylisticly acceptable. as always, there may be other false positives as well.
thanks, simon et al., for this release.
for sommerlund and the kai,
leroy
page1
as close to the originals as they => as close to the originals as it
page 4
particular interest regards miniatures => particular interest regarding
miniatures
painting tips and the like => painting tips, and the like
'wargames' orientated => 'wargames oriented
company Many => company. Many
mace; a => mace, a
a very useful features => a very useful feature
my hobgoblin tribe bear => my hobgoblin tribe bears
portcullis's => portcullises
page 6
entire wall surfaces => entire wall surface
page 7
tunnels, mines and => tunnels, mines, and
flying creatures etc => flying creatures, etc
page 9
Citadel have opted => Citadel has opted
that compliments => that complements
weapons, banners and => weapons, banners, and
Wooden beams, doors and => Wooden beams, doors, and
bandits, rebels or => bandits, rebels, or
thieves guild => thieves' guild
page 11
Night Goblin range; a => Night Goblin range, a
the career of the NPC and the => the career of the NPC, and the
Citadel casting from their => Citadel casting from its
altar and victim; all => altar and victim -- all
High Elf; the flag => High Elf, the flag
enamel, acrylic or => enamel, acrylic, or
Small details, lettering and => Small details, lettering, and
page 12
most unlikliest => unlikliest OR most unlikely
cars, trucks and => cars, trucks, and
'tech no-junk' =>??? 'techno-junk'
TTG produce => TTG produces
space-pirates, outlaws or => space-pirates, outlaws, or
imperial marines; battling it => imperial marines, battling it
Adventurers, Ship Crew and => Adventurers, Ship Crew, and
lengths, colours and => lengths, colours, and
supplier isgiven atthe => supplier is given at the
Asgard produce => Asgard produces
1135th scale => 1/35th scale
scout vehicle bight) => scout vehicle (right)
page 13
You would => you would
page 14
cheap, resilient and => cheap, resilient, and
leader, musician or => leader, musician, or
Arrows, severed heads and => Arrows, severed heads, and
page 16
figure reviews, hints and => figure reviews, hints, and
is colour; which colours => is colour -- which colours
diagonally opposite => diametrically opposite
according to the chart above => according to the chart below
(shading and highlighting guide under the blue row, deep shadow column, 'BLACK'
is entered twice)
page 19
quality brushes, therefore => quality brushes; therefore
look after it; store => look after it: store
construction facilities => construction facilitates
characteristics generally ensures => characteristics generally ensure
Thinner Cellulose thinner => Thinner: Cellulose thinner
blend well therefore => blend well. Therefore
page 20
leg the folds => (e.g. the folds
in this fashion, and => in this fashion -- and
the figure, otherwise => the figure; otherwise
parts thinner; about the => parts thinner: about the
(rubbing when handled) => ??? (they rub off when handled)
Citadel Spacefarer's => Citadel Spacefarers
page 22
figures, modelling and painting => figures, modelling, and painting
feathers, chainmail and hair => feathers, chainmail, and hair
in a tight colour => in a light colour
coat, dry-brushed with a medium red and => coat, dry-brushed with a medium red,
and
shall betaking => shall be taking
3 small, 4 medium and => 3 small, 4 medium, and
canoes, coracles and => canoes, coracles, and
page 24
The diagrams below => The diagrams above
produce 'character. => produce 'character'.
(Fig 2),. a Ronin => (Fig 2), a Ronin
RPG's such as Recon => RPGs such as Recon
James Bond 007, Top Secret and => James Bond 007, Top Secret, and
The bamboo but => The bamboo hut
Chronicle, Citadel, Asgard and Essex => Chronicle, Citadel, Asgard, and Essex
play, reduce arguments and => play, reduce arguments, and
red, yellow and black => red, yellow, and black
page 26
figures, modelling and painting => figures, modelling, and painting
or another; the best => or another: the best
tunnel, corridor or => tunnel, corridor, or
(white perspex, formica or vinyl => (white perspex, formica, or vinyl
set), flexible and reusable => set), flexible, and reusable
straight-edged rule and => straight-edged rule, and
staircases, bridges and => staircases, bridges, and
Otherworld Artifacts specialise...and produce => Otherworld Artifacts
specialises...and produces
fungi, pilasters and urns => fungi, pilasters, and urns
model moulds, have => model moulds, has
'Warrior's Watchtower' by Otherworld Artifacts => 'Artifacts' is not italicised
New from Citadel are => New from Citadel is
dungeon chambers, corridors and => dungeon chambers, corridors, and
windows, chests and beds, can => windows, chests, and beds can
in Otherworld Artifacts range => in Otherworld Artifacts' range (and italicise
'artifacts')
style pillars and flora => style pillars, and flora
under 'useful addresses' the italicisation is inconsistent
page 28
figures, modelling and painting => figures, modelling, and painting
Miniature Masters, for example, supply => Miniature Masters, for example,
supplies
Grenadier Models produce => Grenadier Models produces
£1.25, boxed sets => £1.25; boxed sets
book and lantern and => book and lantern, and
dark colour; green => ??? dark colour: green
how they compliment each => how they complement each
this creature-don't => this creature -- don't
page 30
figures, modelling and => figures, modelling, and
grey, black and brown => grey, black, and brown
M33 mixed 50'50 => M33 mixed 50-50
method of painting' horses => method of painting horses
matt tan, rust red or orange => matt tan, rust red, or orange
lower legs, flanks and => lower legs, flanks, and
Fantasy Men At Arms => Fantasy Men-At-Arms
black legs, mane and tail => black legs, mane, and tail
Mane tail are the same colour => Mane and tail are the same colour
page 32
figures, modelling and => figures, modelling, and
17th 1985, saw => 17th 1985 saw
"Open Days' => 'Open Days'
fancy dress and => fancy dress, and
dungeon and wilderness/campaign => dungeon and wilderness campaign
mounted figure and horse => mounted figure, and horse
The Fighting Fantasy range of fighters => The Fighting Fantasy range's fighters
shields and weapons => shields, and weapons
Citadel plan => Citadel plans
weapons and possibly => weapons, and possibly
Citadel are => Citadel is
Citadel have => Citadel has
reader's page and => readers' (?) page, and
resin) and strip => resin), and strip
under Fig 6, 'citadel' is not italicised
page 34
Tungsten (ASA80); => Tungsten (ASA80),
Tungsten (ASA40); => Tungsten (ASA40),
pebbles, sand and => pebbles , sand, and
grey, brown and green => grey, brown, and green
lichen, twigs, pebbles etc => lichen, twigs, pebbles, etc.
page 35
star of stage, screen and => star of stage, screen, and
Fig 2, is => Fig 2 is
applying awash => applying a wash
Dave Andrews and Tony Ackland => Dave Andrews, and Tony Ackland
page 36
figures, painting and => figures, painting, and
size, shape or colour => size, shape, or colour
added, arranged and rearranged => added, arranged, and rearranged
con fused=> con- fused
is pressed; camera shake => is pressed, camera shake
A hole is cut in the front large enough to accommodate your choice => (choice
of what? camera?)
prepared, painted and based => prepared, painted, and based
under Fig 4, 'eagle studios', 'studios' is non-italicised
customized, based and painted => customised (?), based, and painted
page 38
your RPGs or simply => your RPGs, or simply
all angles; but more => all angles, but more
hat, beard and outer cloak => hat, beard, and outer cloak
'Hovels' => (not italicised)
(4T; £4.95) and Crookhorn => (4T; £4.95), and Crookhorn
page 39
(fig 6 caption is not matched to picture)
page 40
cloaks, severed heads or belt pouches => cloaks, severed heads, or belt pouches
epoxy) and => epoxy), and
toothpicks and paintbrush => toothpicks, and paintbrush
chainmail, fur and creased => chainmail, fur, and creased
items leg backpacks => items (e.g. backpacks
plate armour and belt pouches => plate armour, and belt pouches
avoid it sticking => prevent it sticking
left hand and the shield => left hand, and the shield
Citadel's AD&D D&D range of figures => ? Citadel's AD&D/D&D ranges of figures
in Fig 8, is => in Fig 8 is (also 'is' need not be italicised)
page 43
backpacks, belts and jackets => backpacks, belts, and jackets
blond, light brown and auburn => blond, light brown, and auburn
Humbrol produce => Humbrol produces
matt, satin or gloss => matt, satin, or gloss
(under this month's photographs, when the number of the figurine is followed by
its price, the two are seperated by a colon. on page 38, for example, the
semi-colon is used)
wielding staff and => wielding staff, and (also staff => ? stave)
Dixon produce => Dixon produces
monsters t hat can be => monsters that can be
page 44
frozen moment in tune => frozen moment in time
slate, rock and sections => slate, rock, and sections
Tetrion, Das Pronto or Milliput => Tetrion, Das Pronto, or Milliput
Rocks, stones and plants => Rocks, stones, and plants
foliage, water and man-made => foliage, water and man-made
wire, Milliput and a vivid => wire, Milliput, and a vivid
Fig 2; truly => Fig 2, truly
boar's head and toadstools => boar's head, and toadstools
casting, however => casting; however
range; a circular => range, a circular
but with interior => hut with interior
page 47
imagination need be => ? imagination needs be
chippings, coarse sawdust or => chippings, coarse sawdust, or
logs, weapons or => logs, weapons, or
the match and painting => the match, and painting
Daleks, Cybermen and assistants => Daleks, Cybermen, and assistants
(£4.95) Brommedir => (£4.95); Brommedir
paraded herein Fig 5 => paraded here in Fig 5
scrawls and badly spaced => scrawls, and badly spaced
complimentary => ? complementary
Hawkmoon, Corum and => Hawkmoon, Corum, and
War Hedgehogs and => War Hedgehogs, and
Comwall => Cornwall
(is the picture on p49, suppose to have a caption?)
page 50
minute amounts of paint you'll be using rules => minute amounts of paint you'll
be using rule
Or, try => Or... try
black, brown and reds => black, brown, and reds
palette knives and => palette knives, and
All three were painted, based and converted => All three were painted, based,
and converted
Citadel wish => Citadel wishes
co-incidental => coincidental
Fig 3; a novel => Fig 3, a novel
owner/painter Mark => owner/painter, Mark
Citadel C15 orc => ? Citadel C15 Orc
headband and => headband, and
all classes; junior => all classes: junior
experts, so => experts; so (here 'so' cannot be an abbreviation for 'so that'
and is therefore an adverb)
dates, times and => dates, times, and
intermediate and advanced => intermediate, and advanced
page 52
undercoat; in => undercoat: in
white, pale browns and reds => white, pale browns, and reds
browns, blues and greens => browns, blues, and greens
teeth, eyes and armour => teeth, eyes, and armour
clothing, weapons and => clothing, weapons, and
The Dark Judges => ('judges' non-italicised)
Fig4 => Fig 4
page 54
at a angle => at an angle
noted earlier). => noted earlier.
C15 Orcs and C12 Goblins => ('orcs' non-italicised; 'goblins' italicised)
page 56
should slate us => (slate?)
the UK, they employ => the UK; they employ
page 57
having some basis is still => having some basis, is still
Matt Mayson; as he => Matt Mayson, as he
we will be Making future => we will be making future
arisen This => arisen. This
Warhammer frontages, there => ('tages' is non-italicised)
Best Regiment or Best Diorama => Best Regiment, or Best Diorama
page 58
Replaced "taste. The" with "taste. The",. => ? (also an extra comma)
(page 28) "etc. => "etc."
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