On Thu, 29 Jul 2010, Jonathan Blake wrote:
(er) 61, 289, 334: If you survive -> If you complete [SO: Or, this
mission successfully -> this mission]
This one is testing my resolve to only change wording that is
incorrect or misleading/burdensome to the reader. The idea that you
could be successful in surviving a mission is not incorrect and it
hints that you must not only survive but be successful for future
missions to take place. But I like Simon's suggestion....
I vote leave as is.
Thing is, as currently written, "successfully" modifies "survive", which means
it's contrasting with
"survive unsuccessfully". I understand how you can be unsuccessful at surviving
something, but I
don't think you can survive something unsuccessfully.
