Ok, thanks.
Deirdre
On Aug 8, 2015, at 9:04 PM, roryphoenix@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote:
This is good. I fixed the typos, but removed the paragraph seeking funding to
achieve the 501c3, since my friend made it clear there could be no grant/gift
until we attained that status. I lowered the total to $175,000. I sent it off
to him with some words about wanting his reaction, making it clear this is
just a dry run trying to gauge his reaction.
Rory
On Fri, 07 Aug 2015 10:17:03 -0400, Deirdre McClure <dmcclure@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
wrote:
thoughts?
This is a rough draft.
