Hi everyone!
In the spirit of trying to have The Storms of Chai ready by the end of
November... I have just finished making a first pass at every single part
of the book and cataloging all the fixes I think we need to make (that I
found in a single pass, that is). I figured the easiest way to let the
Project Aon community process my 200+ suggestions was to create a big
spreadsheet, so... here you go. Happy Thanksgiving (if you're American or
don't mind American holiday wishes)!
I'm attaching the file in Microsoft Excel format and also linking to a
Google Sheet.
<https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1TaCuVbbWCBpRdhW2shAv0fnbnlhvfzMDQ6eXdr9WJBQ/edit?usp=sharing>
The first column has the location in the book (usually the section number,
and they're all in linear order)
The second column has the original text.
The third column has my proposed change(s).
The fourth column contains my reasoning, notes, or other related info.
If the change seemed relatively obvious and non-controversial, I left the
background white, but if the change seemed like something people might want
to discuss, I made the background yellow.
I used as my primary source the simple file Jon linked earlier
<https://test.projectaon.org/en/xhtml-simple/lw/29tsoc.htm>, but if
something was missing from that file (like "The Story So Far") I consulted the
original text file. <https://projectaon.org/staff/jonathan/29tsoc.txt>
I'm trying to think what else I might need to explain because I actually
just arrived in London for a week long stay and might not be in a great
position to answer email for a while. I will say my feelings won't be hurt
the least bit if you reject a bunch of my suggestions (that's why I
highlighted a bunch of them in yellow, after all!).
Anyway, I hope this helps get this volume out and in the hands of the
internet public. I can't wait to tell the kids at the Lone Wolf Club at the
Middle School I teach at that there's another volume live for them to
consume!
Thanks for all the memories, Joe Dever; thanks for letting me rediscover
them, Project Aon; and... For Sommerlund and the Kai!
--James Murray
On Sat, Nov 16, 2019 at 10:49 PM Jonathan Blake <
jonathan.blake@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
On 11/16/19 2:01 PM, Ingo Kloecker wrote:
On Samstag, 16. November 2019 22:44:32 CET Ingo Kloecker wrote:
The following link texts should be fixed:That should have been
2: "Turn 181" -> "Turn to 181" (errata)
32: "Turn 181" -> "Turn to 181" (errata)
See also Simon's mail.
Thank you, both! I regenerated the graph based on your commit, Ingo, and
already everything looks much more rational.
https://test.projectaon.org/en/svg/lw/29tsoc.svgz
--
Jon
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