[lit-ideas] Re: Sunday Afternoon poem

  • From: "John McCreery" <john.mccreery@xxxxxxxxx>
  • To: lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Mon, 4 Sep 2006 11:27:15 +0900

I join Stan. A very affecting poem. Just one question. Should the
"rational" in "The rational for the train" be "rationale"? Or am I
missing something?

John

On 9/4/06, Lawrence Helm <lawrencehelm@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:







Hide and seek



There was nothing in front

Of me yet as I walked

On the path through the wood

I could see a darkness

Flitting back and forth

Like a bat searching the forest

For escape.  A tinkling rustle



Like a crystal wind-chime

Stopped me.  There was tinnitus

To set aside so I waited.

I hear so many things:

The rational for the train

In Madrid, the club in Bali.

I stood turning about,



Trying to see what might

Have sounded a tentative

Beauty and I heard it

Again further away

And fainter.  Nothing

Stays when I seek.

Everything disappears.


--
John McCreery
The Word Works, Ltd., Yokohama, JAPAN

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