[lit-ideas] Re: Sunday Afternoon poem

  • From: "Stan Spiegel" <writeforu2@xxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: <lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Sun, 03 Sep 2006 22:15:36 -0400

Lawrence -
Your "Hide and Seek" was quite an affecting piece of work. Haunting. Thanks. 

Stan Spiegel
Portland, ME
  ----- Original Message ----- 
  From: Lawrence Helm 
  To: lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx 
  Sent: Sunday, September 03, 2006 7:35 PM
  Subject: [lit-ideas] Sunday Afternoon poem


                                                                                
                                                      

                                      Hide and seek



  There was nothing in front 

  Of me yet as I walked

  On the path through the wood

  I could see a darkness

  Flitting back and forth

  Like a bat searching the forest

  For escape.  A tinkling rustle



  Like a crystal wind-chime

  Stopped me.  There was tinnitus

  To set aside so I waited.

  I hear so many things:

  The rational for the train 

  In Madrid, the club in Bali.

  I stood turning about,



  Trying to see what might 

  Have sounded a tentative 

  Beauty and I heard it 

  Again further away

  And fainter.  Nothing

  Stays when I seek.

  Everything disappears.

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