M dashes are fine. They are actually a punctuation mark and occur naturally and should be kept. It is a pause, a bit longer than a comma but not as long as an ellipse, smile. for example. She-stared at the killer... standing in her bedroom... staring back at her. She screamed in horror and-after a pause ran out of the room and down the stairs... Shelley L. Rhodes and Judson, guiding golden juddysbuddy@xxxxxxxxxxxx Guide Dogs For the Blind Inc. Graduate Advisory Council www.guidedogs.com The vision must be followed by the venture. It is not enough to stare up the steps - we must step up the stairs. -- Vance Havner ----- Original Message ----- From: "Jill O'Connell" <jillocon@xxxxxxxxxxxx> To: <bksvol-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> Sent: Thursday, January 20, 2005 10:12 PM Subject: [bksvol-discuss] recurring scanning flaw The book I am presently validating has many m- symbols. Does anyone know if this should be replaced by a comma? That's what seems to be called for in most, but not necessarily all, instances. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- No virus found in this incoming message. Checked by AVG Anti-Virus. Version: 7.0.300 / Virus Database: 265.7.1 - Release Date: 1/19/2005 -- No virus found in this outgoing message. Checked by AVG Anti-Virus. Version: 7.0.300 / Virus Database: 265.7.1 - Release Date: 1/19/2005