[bksvol-discuss] Re: I'm having trouble with one stuborn sentence

  • From: "Siobhan" <littlesailorgirl@xxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: <bksvol-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Wed, 21 Nov 2007 19:36:26 -0500

Hi thanks I just fixed that. I'm going to do as much as I can, tere's another few sentences I mant' make senseof so i'll askthe list for help Youguys are wonderful even if I get razy. ----- Original Message ----- From: "Mayrie ReNae" <mrenae@xxxxxxxxxxx>

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Sent: Wednesday, November 21, 2007 5:48 PM
Subject: [bksvol-discuss] Re: I'm having trouble with one stuborn sentence


Hi Siobhan,

        Here is what your sentence should be.

Sights and sounds and smells and touches descended all around Georgia, and suddenly she couldn't get out of there fast enough.

I'm pretty sure that's what should be there.

Peace,
Mayrie

At 02:32 PM 11/21/2007, you wrote:
Hi all. well since Bob has graciously answered every oh jeez not this question again, that I've put to him, i need someone else to hep who might've read the book. Here's the sentence as it is on thepage, I don't know what can be substituted in, there's no wayI can leave it as it is now.

Sights and sounds and smells and touches c scended all around Georgia, and suddenly she couldn't get out of there fast enough. Thanks for any help.


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