[bksvol-discuss] Re: I'm having trouble with one stuborn sentence

  • From: Ann Parsons <akp@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: bksvol-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Wed, 21 Nov 2007 20:17:03 -0500

Hi all,


Original message:
Hi all. well since Bob has graciously answered every oh jeez not this question again, that I've put to him, i need someone else to hep who might've read the book. Here's the sentence as it is on thepage, I don't know what can be substituted in, there's no wayI can leave it as it is now.

Sights and sounds and smells and touches c scended all around Georgia, and suddenly she couldn't get out of there fast enough. Thanks for

Well, Siobhan, I don't know the book, but looks like descended might fit, though I wouldn't write that way.

Ann P.

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