Hi Vicky, hi all,
as John said I’ve got two exams this week so I can’t proofread thoroughly, but
I had a short look & came up with two nitpicks, maybe they’re helpful:
page 36 says:
The RREP is sent by unicast to the next hop router on the route to
OrigAddr, if the next hop is confirmed as an adjacent neighbor.
Does it make sense to specify how they’d be confirmed? For example by writing:
The RREP is sent by unicast to the next hop router on the route to
OrigAddr, if there is a Confirmed entry in the Neighbor Table for the next
hop.
Also, can/should we add Keyur Patel to the Acknowledgments?
Regards, Lotte
Am 06.07.2015 um 12:36 schrieb Victoria Mercieca <vmercieca0@xxxxxxxxx>:
Hi all,
This morning I added the multicast RREP idea. I changed the use of the AckReq
data element to include the address of the intended next hop (and gave that
address an address type value for our new Address Type TLV). I did not write
text that would allow the multicast RREP to take the place of the RREP_Ack.
I also added clarification that the gateway router (Internet AODVv2 Router or
IAR) is not to be configured as a default router. If there is more text that
needs adding for any of the gateway functionality, send it quick! :-)
It could do with a proof-read if anyone has time.
I'm attaching an XML and a TXT file which will need to be submitted later
today as per the deadline of 2359 UTC Monday 6th July. I will leave that for
Charlie to do again.
Did we request a slot for the MANET meeting?
Kind regards,
Vicky.
<draft-ietf-manet-aodvv2-10.txt><draft-ietf-manet-aodvv2-10.xml>
