[survived-dfw] Re: About page
- From: Andree Kehn <andreekehn@xxxxxxxxx>
- To: "survived-dfw@xxxxxxxxxxxxx" <survived-dfw@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Mon, 29 Dec 2014 06:38:13 -0500
I love it! It's very engaging. There are a couple if wires that feel a bit
awkward, admirable feels a little off, but it is very pleasurable to read. I
can't wait to read more!
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> On Dec 29, 2014, at 5:33 AM, Emil Moldovan <emilmoldovan@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
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> Sven,
>
> Sounds very good. I'm a little overwhelmed with work, but I will take a
> closer look these days and let you know if I think something can be improved.
> But again, I think it's already very good. In fact, I'm gonna use it as an
> inspiration soon :)
>
> All the best,
>
> Emil
>
> 29.12.2014 11:03, Sven v. S. wrote:
>> Dear damn fine writers,
>>
>> I would like to hear your opinion about the following text.
>> It´s one of the most important parts on a blog. The About page.
>>
>> Oh and..it´s just a shitty first draft. Made with Dragon Dictate while
>> walking around.
>> It was the first time I didn´t sit in the chair while writing and I will do
>> it always that way from now on. Give it a try :)
>>
>> Here we go:
>>
>> Welcome to the Canary Islands
>>
>> When it's your first time in Gran Canaria, it can be quite overwhelming to
>> choose what to see and do in a week or two of your holidays.
>>
>> You choose this destination because of the admirable climate and the
>> tropical beaches. And you probably heard that Gran Canaria is a paradise
>> for hikers and adventure travelers.
>>
>> It truly is. And for sure you already researched for weeks hundreds of
>> articles and information about your best possible way to spend your holidays
>> on this island.
>>
>> You know what's the problem with all these information out there?
>> They are mostly written by people who have never been here in life.
>>
>> And after your holidays are over and you are back home, you sadly realize
>> that you haven't seen Gran Canaria at all.
>>
>> It's that moment when friends telling you "What? You haven´t seen...?
>> Because you trusted mediocre posts from journalists...
>>
>> Make your holiday in Gran Canaria being a magic experience.
>>
>> - Get off the beach and jump into your hiking boots
>> - Go local and get to know the authentic Gran Canaria
>> - Discover the island´s secrets
>>
>> We created this travel blog to provide valuable insider information for
>> active travelers, nature lovers, and history buffs.
>>
>> To let you get the maximum out of your holidays. To let you see and visit
>> the most beautiful places and to get to know the local history.
>>
>> Made by two German expats, who are enjoying life in the Canaries since a
>> decade.
>>
>> Sven is the man with a pen, who passes over his passion for Gran Canaria by
>> putting his love into words.
>>
>> Nils is the field staff, your guy when it comes to sporty activities, and
>> he is responsible for closing extraordinary deals that let you save some
>> bucks in your holidays.
>>
>> Join our journey and enjoy your Adventure in Gran Canaria.
>>
>> Talk soon,
>> Sven and Nils
>>
>>
>> --
>>
>> Gran Canaria Travel Guide
>> adventuregrancanaria.com
>>
>>
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