[survived-dfw] Re: About page

  • From: Charlie Bannister <charlie@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: survived-dfw@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Mon, 29 Dec 2014 09:53:04 +0000

Sven,
    sounds good.

I’ve edited some of the bits that sounded strange to my ear (and distracted me 
from your message). Hope that’s useful.

It probably needs a Call To Action at the end? Not sure.


Charlie


Welcome to the Canary Islands.

When it's your first time in Gran Canaria, it can be quite overwhelming to 
choose what to see and do in a week or two of your holidays.

You chose this destination because of the admirable climate and the tropical 
beaches.  And you probably heard that Gran Canaria is a paradise for hikers and 
adventure travellers.

It truly is.

And for sure you already researched for weeks hundreds of articles and facts 
about the best possible way to spend your holiday on this island. 

You know what's the problem with all this information?
It's mostly written by people who have never been here in their lives! 

And after your holidays are over and you are back home, you sadly realise that 
you didn't really see Gran Canaria at all.

It's that moment when friends are asking you "What? You didn’t see…?"
Because you trusted mediocre posts from journalists...

Make your holiday in Gran Canaria a magic experience.

- Get off the beach and jump into your hiking boots
- Go local and get to know the authentic Gran Canaria
- Discover the island´s secrets

We created this travel blog to provide valuable insider information for active 
travellers, nature lovers, and history buffs. 

To let you get the maximum out of your holidays. To let you see and visit the 
most beautiful places and to get to know the local history. 

Made by two German expats, who have been enjoying life in the Canaries for a 
decade. 

Sven is the man with a pen, who passes over his passion for Gran Canaria by 
putting his love into words. 

Nils is the field guy,  your expert when it comes to sporty activities,  and 
he’s passionate about closing extraordinary deals that let you save some bucks 
on your holiday. 

Join our journey and enjoy your Adventure in Gran Canaria.

Talk soon,
Sven and Nils
> On 29 Dec 2014, at 09:03, Sven v. S. <svoogle@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
> Welcome to the Canary Islands
> 
> When it's your first time in Gran Canaria, it can be quite overwhelming  to 
> choose what to see and do in a week or two of your holidays.
> 
> You choose this destination because of the admirable climate and the tropical 
> beaches.  And you probably heard that Gran Canaria is a paradise for hikers 
> and adventure travelers.
> 
> It truly is.  And for sure you already researched for weeks hundreds of 
> articles and information about your best possible way to spend your holidays 
> on this island. 
> 
> You know what's the problem with all these information out there?
> They are mostly written by people who have never been here in life.  
> 
> And after your holidays are over and you are back home, you sadly realize 
> that you haven't seen Gran Canaria at all.
> 
> It's that moment when friends telling you "What? You haven´t seen...? 
> Because you trusted mediocre posts from journalists...
> 
> Make your holiday in Gran Canaria being a magic experience.
> 
> - Get off the beach and jump into your hiking boots
> - Go local and get to know the authentic Gran Canaria
> - Discover the island´s secrets
> 
> We created this travel blog to provide valuable insider information for 
> active travelers, nature lovers, and history buffs. 
> 
> To let you get the maximum out of your holidays. To let you see and visit the 
> most beautiful places and to get to know the local history. 
> 
> Made by two German expats, who are enjoying life in the Canaries since a 
> decade. 
> 
> Sven is the man with a pen, who passes over his passion for Gran Canaria by 
> putting his love into words. 
> 
> Nils is the field staff,  your guy when it comes to sporty activities,  and 
> he is responsible for closing extraordinary deals that let you save some 
> bucks in your holidays. 
> 
> Join our journey and enjoy your Adventure in Gran Canaria.
> 
> Talk soon,
> Sven and Nils

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