[projectaon] My reading of 23mh
- From: Jonathan Blake <blake.jon@xxxxxxxxx>
- To: Project Aon List <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Fri, 9 Oct 2009 14:15:38 -0700
Here's what I found:
(ne) title: ‘the Isle of Lost Heroes’ -> the Isle of Lost Heroes
(er) tssf: Sadanzo—the agent of Naar -> Sadanzo—an agent of Naar
(er) 51: a second deafening Crack! -> another deafening Crack! [jb:
This is the third by my count.]
(er) 72: Grand Master Discipline of Animal Control -> Grand Master
Discipline of Animal Mastery
(er) 125, 283: The text here specifically mentions a crown on their
eagle's head livery, so I think the lack of a crown in the
illustration is distracting.
(er) 187: as it steady gains speed -> as it steadily gains speed
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Jon
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