[projectaon] Re: 23MH Comment Period (Part 2)
- From: Jonathan Blake <blake.jon@xxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Fri, 9 Oct 2009 14:47:01 -0700
On Tue, Oct 6, 2009 at 3:48 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 320: You might not have spoken to the men before (cf. Sections
> 256->111->320). Worth a footnote?
Agreed.
> 323: If Prince Karvas is unarmed, what happened to his short sword (cf.
> Section 170)? Should we add a footnote somewhere [Anders Osterberg]
Unless it was the airship crash or the wardrobe change, I don't
remember why he would be unarmed. Is this a story thread that I
missed?
> 323: inflammable sap -> flammable sap
OK as-is.
> 331: glad news -> good news [so: maybe?]
OK as-is.
> 340: With 1,200 miles yet to cover you know-> With 1,200 miles yet to cover,
> you know
Agreed.
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Jon
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