[projectaon] 23MH Comment Period (Part 2)
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: Project Aon <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Tue, 06 Oct 2009 11:48:30 +0100
Hi
The second HUGE batch here. :-) I think we all deserve a big pat on the back for getting Book 23
into such a good shape. Anyone else spotted any other problems?
320: You might not have spoken to the men before (cf. Sections 256->111->320).
Worth a footnote?
323: If Prince Karvas is unarmed, what happened to his short sword (cf. Section 170)? Should we add
a footnote somewhere [Anders Osterberg]
323: inflammable sap -> flammable sap
331: glad news -> good news [so: maybe?]
340: With 1,200 miles yet to cover you know-> With 1,200 miles yet to cover,
you know
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Simon Osborne
Project Aon
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