[projectaon] Re: Ian Page Contact Letter Draft
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Sat, 20 May 2006 21:07:53 +0100
David Davis wrote:
Maybe the bit about "errors" does sound a little bald.
I think it might be kinder to put it in the context of all the books.
How about something such as:
"As with all Joe Dever's Lone Wolf gamebooks, we have been able
to take advantage of feedback from the sizeable fan community for the
books, and correct any little bugs in the rules and add explanatory
footnotes
for sections which sometimes caused confusion for players". - I dunno,
that's a bit waffly too :)
Yeah, taken on board, David. I'll probably go with your phraseology, unless
anyone else cares to improve on it? The weird thing is, when I wrote the
sentence originally, I was referring to problems /we/ introduced, either at the
OCR/proofreading stages, or by improperly implementing the illustrations--how
many times did we discuss where to put those small illustrations in the books?!.
The errata simply didn't occur to me! >_<
--
Simon Osborne
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