Who is this being sent to? Sorry to be 'that guy', but an introduction
would be helpful for me.
Keeping in mind that this is the first time I am seeing this: I agree with
Linda -- though I, too, feel the urge to write a doomsday-esque letter
begging for member voice, I think that an upbeat email might be more
welcoming and therefore, perhaps, more effective. I also agree with keeping
the focus on Nov. 21, simply because it helps keep the letter short and
simple.
Fernando
On Tue, Sep 29, 2015 at 9:12 AM, Linda Atherton <l.atherton@xxxxxxx> wrote:
What I just sent is incomplete. I was typing mid-sentence when it suddenly
emailed itself!
Next sentence would be:
Knowing how many singers we will have and the distribution of voices is
key to picking the best possible music for this concert.
Anyway, something like that. Keep it upbeat. Focus only on the one
concert. Oh, and add that we need to hear back from folks ASAP since time
is shoet.
Linda
On Sep 29, 2015, at 9:05 AM, Margaret L. Merrill <mloringme@xxxxxxxxx>wrote:
November concert. Opening by mentioning the March concert makes it seem as
Thanks, Linda.
M
On Sep 29, 2015, at 9:04 AM, Linda Atherton <l.atherton@xxxxxxx> wrote:
- I'm thinking we should keep the focus for this email on just the
if it is the one we're most concerned about. Including it at all dilutes
the importance of the most pressing issue - finding out who can sing in
November.
regular attendance pep rally letter should be separate and more upbeat.
Our worry about dwindling numbers is too apparent, as well. I think the
fall holiday concert on Saturday, November 21. We will be collecting food
Calling All Singers!
Skillin's Greenhouses in Falmouth has generously offered us space for a
and donations for Good Shepherd food bank, as well as recruiting new
members for Phoenix Chorale.
concert and regular rehearsal attendance from now until the concert and whoWe need a show of hands, please, as to who can commit to singing at the
can commit to singing at the concert.
wrote:
Linda
On Sep 29, 2015, at 8:02 AM, Margaret L. Merrill <mloringme@xxxxxxxxx>
March to raise funds for Immigrant Legal Advocacy Project (ILAP). In the
Please send edits, feedback, thoughts - SOON!
Margaret
Greetings,
Calling all singers - in the long term - we have a concert planned for
short term, a concert is being put on the calendar for Saturday, November
21, most likely to be held at Skillins in Falmouth.
for our performances is key to our planning and moving forward.Knowing who is able to commit to regular attendance and availability
Understandably we all have Thursdays when other aspects of life takes
precedence, but if those able and willing to commit to a November 21
concert can speak up, it will help inform and guide us as plans are put
into place.
Thank you.
Best,
The Board of Directors & the Artistic Director