The original looks correct to me in this instance - reject? > From: pamail.cgi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx > To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx > CC: ch.honza@xxxxxxxxxx > Subject: [projectaon] Editor's Companion Submission > Date: Thu, 17 May 2012 07:50:38 -0700 > > The following was sent from the Editor's Companion form > From: Jan Charvát <ch.honza@xxxxxxxxxx> > Date: 14:50:38 on Thursday, May 17, 2012 > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ > > (??) 16tlov 315: ...the Elder Magi arranged for his safe passage... -> ...the > Elder Magi arranged for him safe passage... [jc: Not 100% sure it is > incorrect, but seems awkward to me...] > > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ > > ~~~~~~ > Manage your subscription at //www.freelists.org/list/projectaon > >