The following was sent from the Editor's Companion form From: Jan Charvát <ch.honza@xxxxxxxxxx> Date: 14:37:27 on Monday, February 1, 2010 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (??) 27v 219: [jc: Change the third and fourth choose. It should be 0: 123 (death), 1-3: 300 (-3 EP), 4-7: 192 (-2 EP), 8 or more: 254 (-1 EP).] (??) 27v 166: [jc: alter the vertical spacing of the first three rows] (??) 27v 47: [jc: This is a bit weird. Maybe sort out the chooses ascending: 0-3, 4-8, 9] (??) 27v 286: slip them on over your tunics -> slip them on over (their) tunics [jc: or is it grammatically correct?] (ft) 27v 248: [jc: Should Kai Grandmaster use here 'Sunderer' or 'Andarin Warhammer' to avoid Kai Weapon CS loss? (sections 46, 122 and 323)] (er) 27v 103: you should be part -> you should be parted (??) 27v 220: Magnakai healing skills -> Kai healing skills [jc: Standardize Kai/Magnakai in this book, in sect. 10, 82, 102, 165, 213, 264, 310 and 321.] (??) 27v 318: If you have yet to attain this level of Kai rank, -> If you do not possess this discipline, or have yet to attain this level of Kai rank, [jc: In section 334, you could use also Grand Pathmanship discipline.] (??) 27v 318: If you have attained the Kai rank of Sun Lord, -> If you possess Grand Huntmastery, and have attained the Kai rank of Sun Lord, [jc: In section 334, you could use also Grand Pathmanship discipline.] (??) 27v 1: and as his young Toranese crew -> and as skyship's young Toranese crew [jc: I would use 'his crew' only with Banedon.] ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ Manage your subscription at //www.freelists.org/list/projectaon