[projectaon] Editor's Companion Submission
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From: Jan Charvát <ch.honza@xxxxxxxxxx>
Date: 11:27:45 on Tuesday, January 26, 2010
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(??) 15tdc 56: [jc: Sections 56, 117 and 298 are somewhat nonsensical.
I suggest the following changes: As sections 117 and 298 show different coin
sides, the sentence "With your advanced skills it is easy for you to sense
immediately that the coin is showing heads, but Prarg is not so gifted." should
be deleted from section 56. Also it should be added "'Heads!' says Prarg." in
the section 117 before the first paragraph (as it is in section 298). Then both
sections 117 and 298 are correct.
]
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