[projectaon] Re: Editor's Companion Submission

  • From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Thu, 21 Jan 2010 11:04:29 +0000

On 20/01/2010 15:42, pamail.cgi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

The following was sent from the Editor's Companion form
    From: Jan Charvát<ch.honza@xxxxxxxxxx>
    Date: 15:42:47 on Wednesday, January 20, 2010
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(er) 25totw 200: If you possess Dargorse Buds, and wish to use them, turn to 230. 
->  If you possess Dargorse Buds, turn to 230. [jc: I think this isn't an 
optional using of Buds. The dog will scent them nonetheless.]
(er) 25totw 282: orangey light ->  orange light

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#1: Yes, this makes sense. Fixed! 
<http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/25totw/sect200.htm>
#2: Rejected as 'orangey' is a legitimate word. See <http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/orangey?jss=0> 


(??) 26tfobm 98: lose 3 ENDURANCE points. -> lose 1 ENDURANCE point. [jc: 
Compare with section 70, or maybe -3EP in sect 98 and -5EP in sect 70.]
(ne) 26tfobm 139: you find only two unbroken items: a Shovel and a Pick. [jc: 
Could you keep the Shovel and the Pick? If yes, maybe each of them will occupy 
2 slots in the Backpack (like in book 4).]


Both escalated...

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