[projectaon] Editor's Companion Submission
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From: Jan Charvát <ch.honza@xxxxxxxxxx>
Date: 15:37:06 on Friday, March 20, 2009
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(er) 20tcon 258: But with respect, Lord Rimoah,? you reply, ?the scabbard in
which I carry the Sommerswerd is woven from strands of pure korlinium.? You
lift the sword, in its scabbard, and invite Rimoah to inspect it more closely.
He steps forward and his eyes run up and down the length of the sword's
seemingly plain sheath. Sagely he nods his approval. -> But with respect, Lord
Ardan,? you reply, ?the scabbard in which I carry the Sommerswerd is woven from
strands of pure korlinium.? You lift the sword, in its scabbard, and invite
Ardan to inspect it more closely. He steps forward and his eyes run up and down
the length of the sword's seemingly plain sheath. Sagely he nods his approval.
[jc: If Lord Rimoah gave LW korlinium scabbard in book 12, he surely would know
that in this section. Therefore I suggest to change him for Lord Ardan]
(er) 20tcon 27: ?It is a fine blade, Grand Master,? says Rimoah, ?but be sure
to use it with utmost discretion. -> ?It is a fine blade, Grand Master,? says
Lord Ardan, ?but be sure to use it with utmost discretion. [jc: If Lord Rimoah
gave LW korlinium scabbard in book 12, he surely would know this in book 20
section 258]
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