[lit-ideas] Re: Calling all grammar mavens...

  • From: Eric Yost <mr.eric.yost@xxxxxxxxx>
  • To: lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Mon, 11 May 2009 11:42:16 -0400

Usually if one has to construe difficult punctuation, the sentence should be rewritten.


"Phil, the weatherman's, shadow could be seen as his impression of his importance in the world -- casting a long shadow and so forth."

Weatherman Phil's shadow ...

The shadow of Phil the weatherman ...

Since the appositive of Phil is weatherman, one might also write, " The weatherman's, that is, Phil's, shadow ..."

Sorry if this has already been covered. Just starting to read posts today.

E


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