Editing Group,
With Figures/Tables listings, in Word 2010, I get Figure 1 and Table 1
indented. It works fine with Word2016. (Probably cannot be fixed.)
However comments. When used in the middle of a sentence to separate two
main clauses, punctuate with xxx; however, yyy (pg. 47, 63). Or split into
two sentences.
Search for however and check. Also fix However without a comma (e.g., pages
82, 83). Also search for ", however", and "however "
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Based on visual inspection and some disturbing inconsistencies, here are
some Vertical Spacing Comments;
For Section 3: 3.1, 3.2 are on new pages, 3.3 should be on new page, and
the vertical gaps should be the same under the Section headings:
1.1 File Naming Definitions
The following terms and definitions related to file naming and file
referencing for all file formats are defined.:
1.2 Syntax Rules
1. The content of the files is case sensitive, except for reserved
words and keywords.
1.3 Keyword Hierarchy
.ibs FILE
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Do we need extra line feed for A_gnd sentence (page 33)?
Terminal_type column entries (shown in Table 47) as follows:
pin: Pin_I/O, Pin_Rail, A_gnd
die pad: Pad_I/O, Pad_Rail, A_gnd
buffer: Buffer_I/O, Buffer_Rail, Pullup_ref, Pulldown_ref,
Power_clamp_ref, Gnd_clamp_ref, Ext_ref, A_gnd
A_gnd is the simulator global reference node of the Interconnect Model.
And page 36
All Interconnect Models without I/O terminals, but with only rail terminals
are available for simulations.
If an *_I/O pin_name appears on terminal lines of Interconnect Model(s) in
the Interconnect Model
Remove big gap before start of Examples on page 37.
Add line feed above keywords [Series Pin Mapping], [Initial Delay] to match
the start of other keyword definitions.
Remove line feed for Section 10.10.
Start Sections 10.11 and 10.12 on new pages.
Remove line feeds between Section 11 and Section 11.1. Start Section 11.2
on new page and remove line feeds under it.
Reduce line feed spacing on page 299 above Example.
Reduce line feeds on page 300 above The [Interconnect Model] .., and above
An [Interconenct Model] . and elsewhere below on pages 301, 302, etc.
Figure 49 on next page detached from the figure.
Section 12 subsections could have titles and numbers 12.1, 12.2, and
12.3.for Introduction, EMI Parameters for Components, and EMI Parameters for
Models
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Horizontal spacing: do we attempt to use one space or two spaces to start a
new sentence after a period? This is probably not worth fixing for this
release.
Bob
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