Michael,
Can you re-issue draft6 so that we do not save the version with the problems
or improvements below?
Bob
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Sent: Wednesday, January 11, 2023 12:57 PM
To: Mirmak, Michael; ibis-editorial@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [ibis-editorial] Re: [EXT] IBIS 7.2, Draft 6 with Change Summary
Michael,
Thanks for the quick update. I stepped through all the changes and noticed
the following:
There are two instances of "Error! Reference source not found." on page 308
and 312.
I think Table 41 needs an extra Note for PAM_Thresholds to indicate
"Required if Modulation_Levels is present."
Thanks,
Randy
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Sent: Wednesday, January 11, 2023 12:48 PM
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Subject: [EXT] [ibis-editorial] IBIS 7.2, Draft 6 with Change Summary
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Please find enclosed both an updated IBIS 7.2 document, now Draft 6, along
with a proposed change summary document.
In short, we missed a lot more than what was found even in today's meeting.
There were numerous examples missing parentheses (both opening and closing)
and indentation problems in a few additional examples. Fortunately,
PAM_Offsets and PAM_Thresholds were the only parameters missed in the
summary tables (we have 60 parameters for AMI in all).
Feedback is welcome and appreciated. Thanks for the sharp attention to
detail!
* MM
