Darren. That's way better! A couple of thoughts. Not personally keen on the slight chorus on the acoustic guitar at the start of the track. Also not keen on the chorus on the piano solo track but hay, that's just me. Could hear chorus on a rohds that is, if you ended up using one of those instead. Am a bit of a purist when it comes to such things. Great job though! Regards, Phil Muir Accessibility Training Telephone: US (615) 713-2021 UK +44-1747-821-794 Mobile: UK +44-7968-136-246 E-mail: info@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx URL: http://www.accessibilitytraining.co.uk/ _____ From: ddots-l-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:ddots-l-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Darren H Sent: 10 September 2010 17:11 To: ddots-l@xxxxxxxxxxxxx Subject: [ddots-l] Following your feedback -- Finding The Setting Sun (V2.0 Hi folks. Well after your great feedback, I took this whole track back to basics. I kind of got carried away the first time round, so I've stripped down the track and I think it sounds much better for it. Much more breathing space... http://soundcloud.com/the-karmistry-project/finding-the-setting-sun Feedback as ever is always appreciated. Cheers Darren www.karmistry.com/