[projectaon] Re: Missing comma

  • From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: jackphoenix@xxxxxxxxxx, projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Tue, 4 Aug 2015 12:50:11 +0100

On 03/08/2015 22:41, pamail.cgi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

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From: Jan K&#345;íž jackphoenix@xxxxxxxxxx
Date: 21:41:21 on Monday, August 3, 2015
Subject: Missing comma
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I think there's a comma missing in second-to-last sentence of the 4th paragraph
of Flight from the Dark's Story so Far
(http://www.projectaon.org/en/xhtml/lw/01fftd/tssf.htm):

The Darklords, ancient enemy of the Sommlending are attacking.

It should be: The Darklords, ancient enemy of the Sommlending, are attacking.

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Hi Jan

Well spotted! Thanks for ponting this out. It has now been fixed in the xml source and will be fixed in the online edition the next time we update/re-release Book 1.



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