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From: Jan Kří jackphoenix@xxxxxxxxxx
Date: 21:41:21 on Monday, August 3, 2015
Subject: Missing comma
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I think there's a comma missing in second-to-last sentence of the 4th paragraph
of Flight from the Dark's Story so Far
(http://www.projectaon.org/en/xhtml/lw/01fftd/tssf.htm):
The Darklords, ancient enemy of the Sommlending are attacking.
It should be: The Darklords, ancient enemy of the Sommlending, are attacking.
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