HiTen errors that will sort out The Jungle of Horrors. In case you're wondering, the eleventh and final issue from 08tjoh is part of the big list, which I am putting off posting for now. There's also a second big list--a REALLY big list--which I am also holding off posting. I prefer to get a few precedents from Jon and extrapolate from that rather than posting >100 errors in one post.
---------- (er) 111, 139, 201, 276, 288 [x2]: on to -> onto (REJECTED: 63 [opens on to]) (FIXED: 58 [climb onto]; 13, 287 [leap onto];) -> "By chance, you stumble on to a track that..." -> "You take the Grey Crystal Ring from the display case and slip it on to the index finger..." -> "...casting a phosphorescent light on to the domed ceiling." -> "...the Ogian army thunders on to the plateau that surrounds the burning town of Syada." -> "...you slip from the saddle and crash on to the highway." -> "...he lifts you carefully back on to your horse."(er) 13: If you win the combat in four rounds or less, turn to 79. If combat lasts five rounds or longer, turn to 158 -> If you win the first combat in four rounds or less, turn to 79. If the first combat lasts five rounds or longer, turn to 158 [jc: Maybe this is a solution to make this section more doable for players starting from this book. It also make sense, that if LW fights with first Vordak more than 4 turns, the second Vordak could have time to damage the ship's pressure tank]
(er) 24: It is impossible to continue along the track eastwards -> It is impossible to continue northwest along the track
[LM: according to the map, Syada lies to the northwest of Tharro (Jan 2007)] (er) 25: each...are vibrating -> each...is vibrating [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] -> "...each of the black crystal cubes are vibrating, and..." (er) 58: eastern Danarg -> western Danarg [LM: Unless of course the sun sets in the east on Magnamund (Jan 2007)][SO: Not sure about this one. It seems to be saying that Lone Wolf is in the regions of the eastern Danarg. It is a little confusing, though.] -> "...reaching the top just as the sun is sinking into a sea of scarlet mist that shrouds the eastern Danarg..."
(ft) 60: If you possess the Sommerswerd[jfs: Turn to this number if you possess a magical weapon such as the Magic Spear, the Dagger of Vashna, or the Jewelled Mace. But do not apply the bonuses related to the Sommerswerd detailed in that section. Note: For consistency with "The Captives of Kaag", in which, you can combat a Helghast with the Jewelled Mace or the Dagger of Vashna (section 12 -> 330).]
(er) 65: agree a plan -> agree upon a plan [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] -> "Quietly you agree a plan of action."(ft) 74: [Jan Charvát: Maybe you may use the CS bonus from Silver Helm there, as it would be "magical effect" rather than physical. Maybe also there can be used Grey Crystal Ring (with +3 CS - compared to the book 11) Also, it is uncertain, why LW have to reduce his CS to 15, rather than to his basic CS] -> "For this psychic combat reduce your current COMBAT SKILL score to 15...[y]ou are unable to make use of any Special Items, weapons, or Backpack Items."
(er) 89, 280, 299: a-piece -> apiece -> "The fare's 40 Lune a-piece..." -> "One item a-piece and you can continue on your way..." -> "The fare's 40 Lune a-piece..."(er) 242: If you possess any of these Special Items and wish to swap it -> eliminate the final 'it' because the antecedent 'any' does not necessarily refer to a single Item [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007]
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