[lit-ideas] Re: Bra Straps
- From: "Simon Ward" <sedward@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: <lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Wed, 15 Mar 2006 18:04:38 -0000
Cheers Eric.
I find myself on the one hand greatly encouraged and on the other suddenly
mortified that I'll have to find that voice again. Let alone work it into a
longer piece.
I'll think on it, concentrating on the feeling of encouragement.
Regards
Simon
----- Original Message -----
From: "Eric" <eyost1132@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
To: <lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Wednesday, March 15, 2006 5:55 PM
Subject: [lit-ideas] Bra Straps
>>Bra Straps
Hey that's quite good, Simon! You should expand that. It's begging to get
worked into a short story or novel chapter. You give a clear image but no
idea where it is going...a great hook...until the last sentence, when you
say it is going to be postponed. Please do something with that. It's too
good to abandon.
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