Reminds me a bit of Whitman -- you could call it Song of the Disappointed Bus except Whitman wasn't disappointed in anything. What does "Throwaway 2001" mean? Lawrence -----Original Message----- From: lit-ideas-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:lit-ideas-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Eric Yost Sent: Sunday, January 29, 2006 11:52 AM To: lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx Subject: [lit-ideas] some other Sunday poem Sunset on a Bus 1 At Hellertown stop the first in hours, Park View Terrace issues two commands. 2 At a gas station angling back, Regular Plus Super explains what America wants -participation- like other down-to-earth stops, where to refuse to play or revise rules is to be killed or sent to terrible rooms. 3 Dark weather of our times, you think, but the sky sheds itself in orange fire, Under blazing tangerine clouds, cars flock fast in spot-lit packs, trickle into granite scars and ridges, in a boundless blue bowl of orange. 4 Enormous controlled disappointment flags these tamed valleys and hills with chambered brawls of people, hungry weeds, and brawny corn. What clouds my eyes had hurt me -- possums in piles by the road's edge, cement mart at a crossroads drooping against green corridors of farm work, yellow and burnt shale night beyond, microwave pods, blocks of dark soy, vines aching shadows on transformers, hawks winding down the innocent soil, winding down as a witness, except for one cab harvester combining a wet row, its sunsplashed chassis turning enough to give me the gold and fire in its windows. [throwaway 2001] ------------------------------------------------------------------ To change your Lit-Ideas settings (subscribe/unsub, vacation on/off, digest on/off), visit www.andreas.com/faq-lit-ideas.html ------------------------------------------------------------------ To change your Lit-Ideas settings (subscribe/unsub, vacation on/off, digest on/off), visit www.andreas.com/faq-lit-ideas.html