[ibis-editorial] Re: Updated keyword hierarchy and keyword descriptions...
- From: "Muranyi, Arpad" <Arpad_Muranyi@xxxxxxxxxx>
- To: <ibis-editorial@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Tue, 15 Feb 2011 21:29:13 -0800
Mike,
I like the hierarchy drawing a lot better now, but being
as nitpicky as I am, I wonder whether the test could be
at the end of the branch lines, not above? And then I
would put the keyword to the end of the line and list its
subparameters (if any) below the keyword starting in a new
line.
The keyword descriptions format looks better, in the
direction of my previous comments, but I wonder if the
font differences could be made more noticeable. I really
had to zoom in and concentrate to notice what is going
on with the fonts. We could probably discuss this on
the phone easier than in email, though, and I admit, I
am getting really pick about this now...
Thanks,
Arpad
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Michael
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Subject: [ibis-editorial] Updated keyword hierarchy and keyword
descriptions...
Editorial list,
Please find enclosed two documents provided by the TechAmerica technical
writer in order to address suggestions by IBIS participants on the IBIS
5.0 reformatting effort.
- MM
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