Sorry to be so late to the game with editorial review of Version 7.0. I
finally found time during the last several days of holiday travel to do a read
through of most of the draft, including older sections of the document. I
tracked changes, so the easiest way to see these is to view only the markup
from "Author". I made some small edits, while most others are shown as
comments (without actual changes). Some of the changes may be easily
acceptable, while a few comments likely need a bit more discussion.
I can attend an Editorial task group meeting after the holidays to go through
the potential edits as a group. Mike posted my edited version at:
.docx<https://ibis.org/editorial_wip/ver7_0_draft1_rrw.docx> (Thanks Mike!).
Happy New Year all.
Randy
