[ibis-editorial] Re: [EXT] Found another bad sentence in the v7.0 spec

  • From: "Muranyi, Arpad" <Arpad_Muranyi@xxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: "ibis-editorial@xxxxxxxxxxxxx" <ibis-editorial@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Mon, 3 Aug 2020 15:50:40 +0000

Randy,

Oh, I see...  I was reading "then" as in "greater than" or similar.  Now I see 
that
it is like: "first this, then that"...  I don't know whether this needs to be 
changed,
because my English is a learnt language, but it sure confused me...

Thanks,

Arpad
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From: Randy Wolff (rrwolff) [mailto:rrwolff@xxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Monday, August 3, 2020 10:45 AM
To: Muranyi, Arpad <Arpad_Muranyi@xxxxxxxxxx>; ibis-editorial@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: RE: [EXT] [ibis-editorial] Found another bad sentence in the v7.0 spec

Arpad,

The sentence is describing the content of three columns.  Would you prefer it 
be worded as "The first column... The second column... The third column..."?

Randy

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 On Behalf Of Muranyi, Arpad
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Subject: [EXT] [ibis-editorial] Found another bad sentence in the v7.0 spec

Hello Everyone,

I found a bad sentence in the v7.0 specification that we should fix in our next 
release:

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Unless I am missing something, this sentence is missing something...  :)

Thanks,

Arpad
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