[hipl-dev] [Branch ~hipl-core/hipl/trunk] Rev 5177: Improve wording and grammar in RPM description field.
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- Date: Tue, 23 Nov 2010 18:01:29 -0000
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revno: 5177
committer: Diego Biurrun <diego@xxxxxxxxxx>
branch nick: packaging2
timestamp: Tue 2010-11-16 14:44:09 +0100
message:
Improve wording and grammar in RPM description field.
modified:
packaging/hipl-deb.spec
packaging/hipl-rpm.spec
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=== modified file 'packaging/hipl-deb.spec'
--- packaging/hipl-deb.spec 2010-11-23 16:45:06 +0000
+++ packaging/hipl-deb.spec 2010-11-16 13:44:09 +0000
@@ -17,13 +17,12 @@
%description
-Host Identity Protocol (HIP) provides cryptographic authentication to
+The Host Identity Protocol (HIP) provides cryptographic authentication
between hosts and secure communications using IPsec. HIP protocol
-extensions support also mobility and multihoming, and traversal of NATs.
+extensions also support mobility, multihoming and NAT traversal.
-HIP for Linux (HIPL) is an implementation of a HIP implementation that
-consists of the key and mobility management daemon. It includes also
-other related tools.
+HIP for Linux (HIPL) is an implementation of HIP that consists of
+the key and mobility management daemon plus other related tools.
%prep
%setup
=== modified file 'packaging/hipl-rpm.spec'
--- packaging/hipl-rpm.spec 2010-11-16 13:40:30 +0000
+++ packaging/hipl-rpm.spec 2010-11-16 13:44:09 +0000
@@ -15,13 +15,12 @@
%description
-Host Identity Protocol (HIP) provides cryptographic authentication to
+The Host Identity Protocol (HIP) provides cryptographic authentication
between hosts and secure communications using IPsec. HIP protocol
-extensions support also mobility and multihoming, and traversal of NATs.
+extensions also support mobility, multihoming and NAT traversal.
-HIP for Linux (HIPL) is an implementation of a HIP implementation that
-consists of the key and mobility management daemon. It includes also
-other related tools.
+HIP for Linux (HIPL) is an implementation of HIP that consists of
+the key and mobility management daemon plus other related tools.
%prep
%setup
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