2008/7/26 Dennis d'Entremont <dennis.dentremont@xxxxxxxxx>: > I`ve drafted a document with some changes to the getting involved page > (http://www.haiku-os.org/getting_involved_in_haiku). It`s in Open Document > format and would like some comments as to whether or not these first changes > are ok. They are just minor but once I get a better idea of what the web > team wants I`ll be able to make some more changes to either this page or > other areas of the site that need updating. Thanks :) - the changes are good. "rapidly" is misspelled I think maybe the "Create Awareness" section under business sounds a bit redundant - maybe we could change it to just "Marketing - ..." or something, with some slightly different wording that is more business-oriented. just scanning through, I see a couple more changes that would be nice. First, we should try to keep it gender-neutral (i know, most people don't care about this sort of thing, but it doesn't hurt): "having much in his wallet." should be "having much in their wallet." "of someone he knows." should be "of someone they know." etc. I also see some grammar issues elsewhere: "someone to be a sizable help Haiku without having to do much" -- missing a "to" there I think Can you give it a couple of further scans for other similar errors? Also feel free to change any wording that doesn't sound right, or doesn't flow well. Thanks, Urias ----------------------------------------------------------------------- haiku-web@xxxxxxxxxxxxx - Haiku Web & Developer Support Discussion List