No, William is right. The first comma in his original version is incorrect. And you're right that your fix is a fix.
Ursulayou can take U out of comp classes, but you can't take comp classes out of U.
Donal McEvoy wrote:
--- On Fri, 7/11/08, William Dolphin <dolphinw@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:From: William Dolphin <dolphinw@xxxxxxxxxx> Subject: [lit-ideas] Re: Polls: for future reference To: lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx Date: Friday, 7 November, 2008, 3:19 PM Perhaps someday I will learn to read these things before hitting send, but since that day has not yet come, allow me to register my regret for thatfirst, errant comma before Nate Silver's nameSurely it's just as much the comma after. Actually I am unsure it is ungrammatical as it stands any more than it would be if the name was sub-claused further along the sentence i.e.The most accurate prediction of the election's outcome appears to have been not a pollster at all but a young baseball fan, Nate Silver, whose models for projecting results are based on algorithms he developed for fantasy baseball.and note that I meant "stated preference" not "state preference" in that last clause of the third paragraph.Noted. And deeply inexcusable. Donal------------------------------------------------------------------To change your Lit-Ideas settings (subscribe/unsub, vacation on/off, digest on/off), visit www.andreas.com/faq-lit-ideas.html
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