[lit-ideas] Re: Name that Tune

  • From: "Walter C. Okshevsky" <wokshevs@xxxxxx>
  • To: lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx, Paul Stone <pastone@xxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Sat, 21 Nov 2009 12:44:23 -0330

Walter C. Okshevsky wishes to retract the following sentence:

> > Writers who display a lack of understanding of the conceptual and
> aesthetic requirements of paragraphing are rarely read by those readers who >
do. 


And replace it with:

Writers displaying a lack of understanding of conceptual and rhetorical
requirements of paragraphing are rarely read by readers possessing such
understanding.

Thank you for your consideration. We now return you to your regularly scheduled
programming.

Truth, cadence and rhythm forever,

Walter O.
















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