[projectaon] Errata Sprint Addendum #5 -- Sing. vs. pl. (cont'd)

  • From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: Project Aon <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Mon, 11 Jul 2011 17:47:51 +0100

OK, this is the last one of these, y'all.

Thank you for all the input, help, and support so far; just this last one to go now. It's a bit of a thorny, contentious issue, though, though I didn't realise it at the start, so tread softly because you tread upon the fans' dreams. (I know there are still two issues outstanding from the previous list, but now seems a good time to post these for discussion...)


The Omega Zone

(er)    Dateline to Destruction:        HAVOC attempt -> HAVOC attempts
(er)    Dateline to Destruction:        HAVOC hijack -> HAVOC hijacks
(er)    Dateline to Destruction:        broadcast -> broadcasts
(er)    Dateline to Destruction:        HAVOC refuse -> HAVOC refuses
(er)    Dateline to Destruction:        HAVOC repeat -> HAVOC repeats
(er)    Dateline to Destruction:        extend -> extends
(er)    Dateline to Destruction:        HAVOC enact -> HAVOC enacts

<http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml-less-simple/fw/03toz/title.htm#dtd>


(er) 42: The colony have begun the break-out! -> The colony has begun the break-out!

<http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml-less-simple/fw/03toz/title.htm#sect42>


(er)    150:    HAVOC were -> HAVOC was

<http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml-less-simple/fw/03toz/title.htm#sect150>


(er)    302:    HAVOC was -> HAVOC were

<http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml-less-simple/fw/03toz/title.htm#sect302>


(er)    350:    The colony are overjoyed -> The colony is overjoyed

<http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml-less-simple/fw/03toz/title.htm#sect350>


California Countdown

(er)    155:    The colony have decided -> The colony has decided

<http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml-less-simple/fw/04cc/title.htm#sect155>



For reference:

colony was: 01hh: Cal's Story, 318; 02smr: tssf; 03toz: tssf; 04cc: tssf [x3]
colony were: 01hh: --; 02smr: --; 03toz: 102; 04cc: --

colony is: 01hh: 1, 93, 100, 178, 327; 02smr: 252; 03toz: --; 04cc: 204, 293, 305
colony are: 01hh: 39, 231; 02smr: 168; 03toz: 350; 04cc: --

colony has: 01hh: 1, 185, 188, 216; 02smr: --; 03toz: 119, 230; 04cc: --
colony have: 01hh: 120; 02smr: --; 03toz: 42; 04cc: 155

Are there some of these that should also be changed (e.g. instances in 01hh which was never audited for sing. vs. pl. issues)? I think I have all possibilities listed here, but I've learned to never be 100% sure about any aspect of Project Aon...damn +2 Mentora bonus...

--
Simon Osborne
Project Aon

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