[lit-ideas] Re: poem
- From: Donal McEvoy <donalmcevoyuk@xxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Wed, 17 Nov 2010 14:47:48 +0000 (GMT)
--- On Wed, 17/11/10, Mike Geary <jejunejesuit.geary2@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>Thanks to those who said they liked my poem. And thanks to those who didn't
>say they didn't like it. : )>
My comment:-
"In September, I touched you
and you looked away.
I heard the leaves die."
Auden, Yeats, and perhaps even Eliot would, I think, have finished "I heard
that leaves die," for reasons too numerous to mention.
Where that puts me?
Donal
London
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